ichoufani,
I had a hard time making it through this. Not because of extreme poetic safistication, though. Maybe if you looked beyond the cliches of love and religion you could turn this into something worthwhile. As for now, I can pick up any Zen poet and get a much better version of the mysteries of the soul. Trash this, get a new notebook and start from scratch.
Brad
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